Monday, April 8, 2013

Goldilocks and the three bear's persuasive writing

My opinion is that Goldilocks should go to jail.

Firstly, she broke into the bear’s house. She knew that she wasn’t allowed break into the bear’s house. The thing that she did was trespassing and it was against the law. She also had no right to do that. Would you like it if she broke into your house?

Secondly, she used things without asking and broke things. She broke things that she couldn’t afford to pay for the things that she broke in the house. How would you like it if she came into your house and broke things in your house?

Thirdly, she left when the bears came home. It was so rude that she ran away from the bears because she didn't come back and ask for forgiveness. She also didn’t say sorry for what she did. How would you feel if she did not come back and say sorry for what she had done?

My opinion of Goldilocks is she should go to jail because she did not have a right to break into the bear’s house.

1 comment:

Fuatino said...

Great first effort with your Persuasive Writing Simione. You've used good arguments and it's great to see you using rhetorical questions. Keep it up :)

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